Process diagrams can show cyclic processes like the life cycle of a pond frog from egg to adult. Notice how arrows are often used to lead you through the stages in the diagrams.

Process diagrams can show cyclic processes like the life cycle of a pond frog from egg to adult. Notice how arrows are often used to lead you through the stages in the diagrams.
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The diagram given is a process diagram that displays the lifecycle of an adult
frog
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from an egg to an adult.
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,the lifecycle consists of 11 stages that a
frog
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goes through.Beginning with it being an egg and ending with a grown-up
frog
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. The first stage in the life cycle is the eggs,where the frogs are
initially
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eggs like any other animal.After that, they are transformed into embryos where the tadpoles cling to water-plant.
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for the
frog
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to breathe there are external gills that are made.Afterwards, the
frog
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tail
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develops and grows larger and larger in size,and
then
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hindlegs appear. The
tail
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of the
frog
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stores food which the
frog
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survives and gets its nutrients.
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the front legs of the
frog
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appear,as the
frog
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is growing
it
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its
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tail
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is getting shorter. As the legs are covering it.
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the
tail
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is completely disappeared and a whole young
frog
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is developed.
Thisthis
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This
leaves us to the
last
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stage where the
frog
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keeps on growing until it is an adult
frog
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words frog, tail with synonyms.
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