The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty. They are from the United States in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph presents the percentage distribution of women living in poverty in the United States in 2008, alongside their sex, age, and marriage status.
Overall
, what stands out is that the majority of females living in poor conditions consist of single ones with no children, Linking Words
while
married individuals with no kids had the lowest share.
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To begin
with, single females with no child were responsible for more than half of the total proportion, representing 54%, the highest ratio among four other categories. Linking Words
On the other hand
, single female parents who had taken children under their support covered up to 26% Linking Words
percent
, nearly half of the first group, but with the second highest figure.
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per cent
In addition
, in the married section, couples with kids who lived in poverty covered 12% of the total community, and the ones with no children had the lowest share of 8%. Linking Words
This
might indicate that couples have better opportunities when they are together when dealing with conflicts.Linking Words
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