In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. Do the advantages of this new approach outweigh the disadvantages?
In
this
technology-savvy world, nowadays the trend of online classes has grown Linking Words
predominantely
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predominantly
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however
in the Add a comma
however,
past
a majority of Add a comma
past,
population
used to attend offline classes. Add an article
the population
This
has its rewards and detriments. If questioned, the merits of Linking Words
this
situation surpasses the demerits. My inclination is justified Linking Words
further
.
Discussing the merits, the most obvious one is that they can watch the lectures whenever they get Linking Words
time
. To elaborate Use synonyms
further
, e-learning is more convenient for the learners in order to attend any of the social gatherings Linking Words
as well as
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playing
whenever they want. Replace the word
play
For example
, all of the Linking Words
educatee
feel free to join any classes at any Change to a plural noun
educatees
time
, which can Use synonyms
makes
them mentally relaxed as they can wake up late and set their Change the verb form
make
time
for the education Use synonyms
according to
their mood. Another one is that they can save travelling Linking Words
time
. Use synonyms
For instance
, they can stay at home and utilize their Linking Words
time
on reading Use synonyms
instead
of travelling.
There are ample demerits too. Linking Words
Firstly
, they can not focus on learning properly as no one is there to Linking Words
looking
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look
on
them. To add to Change preposition
at
this
, students can not concentrate properly which can lead to Linking Words
less
marks in Correct word choice
lower
exam
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exams
as
in online education, if they have any doubt, it will be hard to ask Change preposition
apply
tutor
as all the lectures are recorded. Correct article usage
a tutor
Secondly
, they can get addicted to Linking Words
internet
, which can Add an article
the internet
makes
them Change the verb form
make
introvert
as they have to use Wrong verb form
introverted
Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
for the curriculum.
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computers
To conclude
, it can be Linking Words
finally
commented that there are some disadvantages, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
lake
of concentration and addiction to electronic gadgets. Correct your spelling
lack
However
, there are myriad advantages Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
svaing
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saving
time
Use synonyms
of
travelling Change preposition
for
as well as
spending Linking Words
their
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apply
time
with family. Use synonyms
Hence
, my arguments prove that Linking Words
advantages
of Correct article usage
the advantages
this
situation are more than Linking Words
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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