The line graph gives information about the proportion of students from age 18 to 25 years old in universities in four various areas (Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines, Thailand) from 1961 to 2011.

The line graph gives information about the proportion of students from age 18 to 25 years old in universities in four various areas (Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines, Thailand) from 1961 to 2011.
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students from age 18 to 25 years old in
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universities from Singapore, Malaysia,
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the Philippines
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and Thailand from 1961 to 2011.
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, the proportion of students going to university had seen a positive trend for all four countries reaching their peak in year 2011. In the year 1961, it is clear from the chart that Malaysia had its lowest figure among all the nations with only 2, which had risen from 2 to 19 in five decades and remained 4th in the list.
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, the Philippines was the third dominant country throughout the time. Thailand had the highest number in proportion of students going to universities in 1961 which dropped from 25 to 20 in ten years. After 1971, there was a slight increase between 1971 to 1991 before it surged to 44 in 2011. For Singapore, it had increased from 15 to 39 in five decades.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • enrollment rates
  • demographic
  • tertiary education
  • fluctuations
  • incremental rise
  • decline
  • plateau
  • significant surge
  • economic indicators
  • educational reform
  • policy implementation
  • socioeconomic factors
  • projected growth
  • benchmarking
  • statistical analysis
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