Weddings are more expensive in many countries present and past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or negative development?
People now and before
tends
to spend huge Change the verb form
tend
amount
of money on marriage celebrations. There are many causes around Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
this
phenomenon Linking Words
make
individuals Correct pronoun usage
that make
insisting
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insist
in
it. In Change preposition
on
this
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essay
I will explore the reasons for Add a comma
essay,
the
expensive weddings and I discuss why it's Correct article usage
apply
good
habit.
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a good
First,
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wedding
ceremony is known to Add an article
the wedding
a wedding
costs
humans a lot of cash Wrong verb form
cost
staring
from the ring and clothes ends with the wedding day. Add to that, the reasons behind that are cultural obligations. In detail, Correct your spelling
starting
some
countries Change preposition
in some
the
big wedding parties are mandatory and everybody from the same culture has to do it no Correct article usage
apply
mattwe
what is the financial situation of the groom Correct your spelling
matter
Linking Words
for
example, the Arab culture is forces Capitalize word
For
the
families to spend money on unnecessary things like Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
an invitation
invitation
, flowers snd gifts for the gusts, Fix the agreement mistake
invitations
moreover
, the idea about the marriage celebration as a one night and should both the bride and groom do everything they Linking Words
wants
puts Change the verb form
want
also
pressure on them.
In my Linking Words
openion
, I support Correct your spelling
opinion
a big weddings
because Correct the article-noun agreement
big weddings
a big wedding
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
brings
happiness to Correct subject-verb agreement
bring
everyon
and Correct your spelling
everyone
brings
family and Correct subject-verb agreement
bring
frinds
together. Correct your spelling
friends
Furthermore
, Linking Words
It's
Correct your spelling
Its
one day
celebration will stay in the memory of the Add a hyphen
one-day
coupls
. But I believe that all Correct your spelling
couples
couple
the
couples can make their dream wedding within their financial abilities.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
, weddings will continue to be expensive and the Linking Words
expensive
is different from Replace the word
expense
culture
to another and country to country but things can be Correct pronoun usage
one culture
managable
.Correct your spelling
manageable
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