The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the procedure of producing
sugar
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by using
sugar
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cane
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.
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, it can be seen that the process
include
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of
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seven stages which initiate with the growing
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sugar
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of sugar
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cane
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on the farms and end with the final product
sugar
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.
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with,
the first step is
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to grow
sugar
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cane
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in the agricultural fields. The duration of
growth
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period is between 12 to 18 months. After that, the produce is harvested by the farmer using hands and it can be
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done by
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an agriculture
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agriculture
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vehicle followed by the collection of
juice
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from
sugar
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cane
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using a crushing machine.
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the fourth step, the
juice
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gets purified
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the help of funnel shaped limestone filter.
This
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juice
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is
then
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transferred to an evaporator where it is heated on a stove to convert
juice
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into syrup.
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it is centrifuged to separate
sugar
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crystals from syrup. At the final stage, separated
sugar
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crystals will be left to dry and cool before getting
it
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apply
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ready for retail.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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