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The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums (the British Museum, the Natural History Museum, and the Science Museum) in London in 2013

The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums (the British Museum, the Natural History Museum, and the Science Museum) in London in 2013
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the provided graph illustrates the rate of being visited for three museums, namely, the
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Museum
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, the Natural History
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, and the
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Museum
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,
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surveyed
 within the area of London in 2013
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, it is evident that the predominant position was held by
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 throughout the analyzed period,
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 it is the opposition
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that can be witnessed for
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Science
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the Science
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.
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, the trend of
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 remained unmoved
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 of the timeline. In the middle of
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 there were just 600
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 to the
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 ,
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 there were almost under 600 to Natural History
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 compared to the
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 which had just 400
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 which is the lowest in June.Coming July , there was a significant increase in
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 to peak at marginally above 700 individuals.
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 , both the Natural History
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 and
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 experienced a decline to slightly under 400
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 there was a decrease across the board until August. Starting from August , the amount of people in three museums started to increase to reach 650
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 for the
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museum
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 and both of the remaining museums depicted a close proximity in attendance which was almost 450
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, museum, science, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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