The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The data presents proportion of the citizens in four Asian countries residing in towns between 1970 and 2020
as well as
Linking Words
forecasts for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
Linking Words
, If we look at the line graph, there are growing tendency for all categories, especially
Malaysia
Use synonyms
hit the highest amount among other countries.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the percentage of the inhabitants in
Thailand
Use synonyms
is observed as the lowest value
at the end
Linking Words
of 2020. In 1970, residents of
Malaysia
Use synonyms
and the Philippines were relatively the same until 1990 but
then
Linking Words
Malaysia
Use synonyms
dramatically increased and reached a peak amount of 75% in 2020. Despite the Philippines
was
Verb problem
having
show examples
the highest rate of residents between 1970 and 1990 ,
then
Linking Words
hovered around 50% until 2020 and became the third highest percentage of the population living in metropolises.
Furthermore
Linking Words
,
percentage
Correct article usage
the percentage
show examples
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
Malaysia
Use synonyms
continued to escalate expected from 2020 to 2040,
also
Linking Words
the Philippines will rise and hit a peak value of 52%.
proportion
Add an article
the proportion
show examples
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
Thailand
Use synonyms
and Indonesia grew relatively the same for 20 years,
Thailand
Use synonyms
plateaued
while
Linking Words
Indonesia soared dramatically from 1990 to 2020. Expectations for the next 20 years,
Thailand
Use synonyms
and Indonesia will steadily grow and become around 50% and 60% in 2040.
Submitted by i.nureddinn on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia, thailand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
What to do next:
Look at other essays: