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he graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.

he graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
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The line graph illustrates the data about the Japanese
month
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 salary on average and the cost of some televisions from 1953 to 1983. From an
overall
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 look, it is manifested that
while
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 the price of
color
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 and black and white
TV
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 experienced a downward trend, the opposite was true for the case of earnings. Delving into
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initially
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, the expense of black and white
TV
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 dominated the chart, with 110
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thousands
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thousand
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Yen
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, continuing to fall steadily to 40
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thousands
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yen
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 in 1980 and eventually hitting a low of only 20
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thousands
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 by 2020. Meanwhile, the cost of
color
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TV
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 observed a similar pattern,
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at
 a lower rate. Starting from
one- tenth
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one-tenth
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 of
million
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a million
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yen
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, it was followed by a gradual decrease and had reduced by
a
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half of the former figure toward the end of the timeframe. There was a stark contrast in the amount of the Japanese
month
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 income. Despite being at the lowest position in 1970, with a low of 20
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thousands
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thousand
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yen
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, it climbed up markedly to surpass the price of black and white
TV
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 to become the predominant value for the vicinity of 65
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thousands
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thousand
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yen
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