The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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diagram illustrates the

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of how

sugar

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is produced.There are 7 stages and each of them goes in sequence.

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,

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diagram presents the key features of the

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.The first and very important part is growing

sugar

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canes

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cane

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.

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produces a product

that is

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then

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processed and turned into a food supplement. It can grow to about 12-18 months. For

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a

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,special equipment is used that helps speed it up.The second step is harvesting,but not only with

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of machines,people do it too.After harvesting

sugar

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canes

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cane

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go to crushing where they are turned into juice.

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,it needs to be cleaned afterwards,so it goes through a limestone filter. Another important step is evaporation.

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is used to bring all the liquid to a boil and turn it into

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apply

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syrup.The next stage is separating

sugar

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crystals from manufactured syrup

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gives almost ready grains.

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of

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sugar

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drying

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is dried

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and

cooling

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and

then

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sorted by special packages.