The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina
The line graph below illustrates the
number
of shop centers which were closed and the new shops during the Use synonyms
7 year
period in one nation.
Add a hyphen
7-year
Overall
, the Linking Words
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
shop
centres which were closed in Replace the word
shopping
this
period declined slightly,except, in 2015 we can see the greatest falling Linking Words
number
. Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
,
the average Remove the comma
apply
number
of opening shopping places Use synonyms
show
a dramatic decrease in Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
this
period.
Linking Words
According to
the information, there are the highest Linking Words
number
of stores in 2011 which were opened with the Use synonyms
number
8,500. Use synonyms
Whereas
, Linking Words
that
Correct determiner usage
the
number
of stores dropped in 2012 to 4,000.Use synonyms
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