The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarize the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Minh Bùi)

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The given maps describe the transformation of the Lakeside

town

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from 2000 to 2009

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, the map became more residential because the

derelic

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derelict

warehouse was used as

carpark

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a carpark

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and more modern with the disappearance of the old

town

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, replaced by offices and

university

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a university

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moreover

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moreover,

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the lake is smaller and became a pond and

located

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is located

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in the centre of the

town

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First of all, on the left

side

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of the river, the

town

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had 2 residential

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area

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areas

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this

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side

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. After that 9 years, the residential

area

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in the north stayed unchanged

while

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the counterpart was replaced by

shopping

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the shopping

a shopping

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centre. The art centre between 2 housing

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area

Fix the agreement mistake

areas

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also

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changed to the cinema. The

derelic

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derelict

warehouse which is on the top and on the right of the north housing

area

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was transformed into

the

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car park. The old

town

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which is to the south of the car park was converted into offices and

university

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a university

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respectively to meet the demand of the

cityzens

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citizens

. The school which is near the river has remained.

Secondly

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, the lake which is in the top-right corner of the

town

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became smaller and

turn

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turned

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into the small pond

Finally

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, on the right

side

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of the river, the

town

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had a residential

area

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this

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side

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which vanished and

replaced

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was replaced

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Change the article

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industrial

industial

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industrial

complex

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

214 words

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