The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21* century. Summarize the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh

The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21* century. Summarize the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh
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The maps illustrate how the town of Lakeside
modifies
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has modified
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in the years of the 21st century.
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, the town of Lakeside experienced significant changes between 2000 and 2009, with the transformation of old into modern facilities, infrastructure developments, and
the
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a
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significant increase in residential and commercial space. From 2000 to 2009, the residential area was one of the things that did not change in the left corner. But for the residential area below,
it
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was developed significantly into a shopping
center
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centre
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. In the middle of it, the art centre was transformed into a cinema theatre.
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the names of these two locations are different, their purpose is to provide entertainment. On the right side, there is the school, and it was not innovated in nearly a decade. Next to it is the old town in 2000, after 9 years, it became offices and
university
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a university
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. The derelict warehouse was developed into a parking lot
instead
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of letting it become something useless. The industrial complex expanded the area
further
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by exploiting more residential areas in 2009.
At the end
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of the 20th century, the industrial park and the centre were separated by the lake, but after that, it was reduced to a pond.
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