The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. How patients evaluated health centre services how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.
The table chart provides key information about the results
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of different
services
of evaluations that Use synonyms
was
taken by patients at Longston Change the verb form
were
Centre
, Use synonyms
Peveril
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Centre
, and Marchbank Use synonyms
Centre
. The units are Use synonyms
meaured
in numbers to represent Correct your spelling
measured
scores
of the survey.
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the scores
Overall
it is clear from the graph that Linking Words
Peveril
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Centre
had the highest score, Use synonyms
comparing
to Longstone Wrong verb form
compared
center
.
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Center
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graph
Longston Add a comma
graph,
Centre
had the lowest Use synonyms
overall
average Linking Words
accounted
for 5.8 Wrong verb form
accounting
due to
several low evaluation Linking Words
rate
regarding the Change to a plural noun
rates
services
provided Use synonyms
such
as booking appointments 5.2 which is significantly low Linking Words
comparing
to other centres
In terms of Wrong verb form
compared
Peveril
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Centre
and Marchbank Use synonyms
Centre
there was a Use synonyms
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competition
compititon
between them but what really affected the results for Marchbank Correct your spelling
competition
Centre
is the rating of the following Use synonyms
services
:
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appoitment
if they work on that they can Correct your spelling
appointment
appointments
mange
to achieve better Correct your spelling
manage
services
.
In summary, Use synonyms
Peveril
Use synonyms
Centre
has the best rating.Use synonyms
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