the table below shows the number of cars made In three countries from 2003 to 2209

the table below shows the number of cars made In three countries from 2003 to 2209
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The data regarding the volume of car manufacture in three nations between 2003 and 2009 is compared in the given table. The units are measured in numbers.
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, it can be easily seen that the highest number of cars was produced in Thailand in all of the examined years, peaking in 2006,
while
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the other two countries showed opposite trends. The
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for Argentina registered an upward trend from just under a fourth of
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million
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in 2003 to about 466 thousand in 2009, reaching 350 thousand in 2006.
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, there was a contrasting trend to the
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for Argentina in the number of manufactured cars in Australia of about a fifth
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until the year 2009
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had started with 450 thousand in 2006. Turning to the
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for Thailand, just below
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three-fifths
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cars were produced in 2003. In the final researched year,
this
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figure
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decreased to a
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before reaching
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peak of over
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1.1
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in 2006. By me
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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