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The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the number of cars produced in
Argentina
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, Australia, and
Thailand
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 between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that
car
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production
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 in
Thailand
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 experienced a consistent and substantial increase throughout the period,
while
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Argentina
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 showed a steady decline. Meanwhile, Australia’s
car
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production
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 fluctuated but ended with the highest figure among the three countries. Looking at the details,
car
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production
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 in
Thailand
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 began at approximately 150
vehicles
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 in 2003 and surged significantly to reach nearly 1,000 cars by the end of the period.
This
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 represents the most notable growth among the three nations.
Similarly
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, Australia saw an initial rise, with
car
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production
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 increasing from 200
vehicles
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 in 2003 to 400 in 2005. Despite a sharp drop
afterward
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,
production
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 peaked at just under 1,120
vehicles
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 by 2009, surpassing both
Argentina
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 and
Thailand
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.
In contrast
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,
Argentina
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 experienced a consistent downward trend. Starting at 400 cars in 2003,
production
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 declined steadily over the years, finishing at just 100
vehicles
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 in 2009.
This
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 made
Argentina
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 the country with the lowest
car
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production
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 during the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, thailand, car, production, vehicles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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