fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming more popular increasingly. Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not. what are your opinions on this?
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people
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food
additives that contribute to weight gain and Use synonyms
health
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food
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health
.
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eating these types of Linking Words
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people
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people
will gain much more Use synonyms
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weight
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To sum up
, I believe the rapid increase in fast Linking Words
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is disadvantageous to Use synonyms
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food
in the near future.Use synonyms
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