Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficlult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartica. What are benefits or disadvantages for tourists visiting such places?
In
the
recent years, Tourism Correct article usage
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is
drastically increased in hard locations. Tourists are getting attracted towards uncertain places which may have pros and cons impacts on it. Verb problem
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This
essay is an attempt to introspect both the positive and negative side of it.
When taking into consideration the choice of travellers towards rarely visited Linking Words
place
brings numerous benefits. Among them, one positive impact Fix the agreement mistake
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that
allows the Add a missing verb
is that
economical
growth of those regions. Replace the word
economic
This
would mean that when people start visiting areas which was not frequently visited will help the locals to develop Linking Words
startup
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and convenient
convenient
stores. Replace the word
convenience
Likewise
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such
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visit
will spread the cultural diversities of different regions. Fix the agreement mistake
visits
For instance
, foreigners entering Africa brought some attention towards tribal culture and many NGOs travelled to help Linking Words
for
development. These are a couple of reasons for tourists visiting difficult terrains.
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However
, there are disadvantages too. The first downside often experienced is Linking Words
availability
of basic Correct article usage
the availability
day to day
needs, which ultimately makes survival hard. To explain, hard terrains do not have farming and sources for food, which makes Add a hyphen
day-to-day
tourist
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tourists
to
starve for food and water. Another repercussion Fix the infinitive
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that is
witnessed is in terms of injury and medical facilities. To substantiate with an example, it could be cited that a person Linking Words
visited
Antarctica was lost for Correct pronoun usage
who visited
long
period and Correct article usage
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he
was struck with Correct pronoun usage
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fatal
injury, he could not find any facilities to treat and Correct article usage
a fatal
prone
to death.
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To conclude
, it is accepted that hard terrain tourism is a subject that has both positive and negative sides to it. In the future, it is anticipated that Linking Words
this
trend is likely to continue.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
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You addressed both the benefits and disadvantages of the topic, showing a balanced analysis.
task achievement
The essay touches on the potential economic benefits and cultural exchange, offering relevant examples for these points.
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