The diagram shows the Process of Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The flowchart provides key information about the process of

manufacturig

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manufacturing

pu-erh raw

tea

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and ripe

tea

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, it is clear from the chart that the manufacturing operation is a multi-stage operation that requires several

steps

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, starting from frying

tea

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leaves, and ending with preparing raw and ripe

tea

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, the initial

steps

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are frying, rolling, and drying,

wheras

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whereas

the final

steps

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consist of compressing,

fremeting

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fermenting

freezing

, and storing.

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the first

steps

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, the process started with exposing

tea

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leaves to a high heat in order to inactivate

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tea's

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the tea's

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enzymes. Once the

inactivitation

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inactivation

process

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occurred

occurs

occured

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occurred

, they started by rolling

as well as

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drying

tea

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leaves by exposing them to the sun. In terms of the final

steps

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, dried

tea

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leaves

called

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were called

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apply

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loose raw

tea

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that they continued processing in order to manufacture ripe

tea

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however

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, a pu-erh raw

tea

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ready,

after

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and after

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that

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that,

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they began storing

tea

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leaves to get a vintage pu-erh raw

tea

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, dried

tea

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leaves

got

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are

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fermented by a

mold

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mould

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and compressed,

therefore

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a ripe

tea

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is ready to use.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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5 paragraphs

174 words

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