Space travel to the moon is considered as “a step of mankind.” But some people think that space travel has made little difference to people’s lives today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Language

Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency to improve grammatical accuracy. For example, 'people has' should be 'people have'.

Task Response

Expand on examples and explanations to enhance the clarity of your arguments. This will make your essay more informative and convincing.

Coherence and Cohesion

Structure each paragraph clearly with a topic sentence followed by explanations and examples to enhance coherence.

Task Response

Your essay presents a clear stance on how space travel has impacted people's lives, showing a strong position.

Introduction

The introduction effectively sets the context of the essay, making it clear what will be discussed.

Conclusion

You have included a conclusion that summarizes your main points effectively.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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