The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and pie charts provided information about between 2017 and 2018 of police
budget
in one area of Britain. The tables present the sources of the funds Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
while
pie charts show where the plan’s money went.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the total Linking Words
amount
of police budget Use synonyms
gradullay
increased, with Correct your spelling
gradually
national
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the national
governmet
being the main funder over the period Correct your spelling
government
governments
of
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apply
shown
. If we Change the form of the verb
show
looking
at the pie charts, Wrong verb form
look
large
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a large
the large
amount
of the plans Use synonyms
spent
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are spent
to
the salaries of the officers and staff Change preposition
on
as well as
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minimum
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the minimum
amount
used for technology.
In 2017, Use synonyms
total
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the total
amount
of Use synonyms
financial
plan was 304.7m but Correct article usage
the financial
then
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slightly increased
reached 318.6m Replace the word
slight increase
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
National
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the National
governmet
was the major funder in 2017 with 175.5m, afterwards Correct your spelling
government
this
value increased by 2.3m and maintained its level over the Linking Words
priod
of 1 year. Compared to Correct your spelling
period
National
government and other sources(eg grants), local taxes showed big growth from 91.2m to 102.3m respectively. Correct article usage
the National
However
, other sources(eg grants) Linking Words
demonstraded
minimal development and arrived at 38.5m in 2018.
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demonstrated
Subsequently
, Salaries of the officers and staffLinking Words
was
spent Correct subject-verb agreement
were
primarilly
, despite marginally Correct your spelling
primarily
declined
from 75% to 69% over the period. Wrong verb form
declining
On the other hand
, Building and transport remained stable at the same level Linking Words
while
Technology rose by 6% Linking Words
along
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with
came to 14% Change preposition
apply
although
it was the category where the least Linking Words
amount
of money was funded.Use synonyms
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