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The two plans illustrate university athletic areas during 1990 and today. The most striking alteration has been to the northern part of the area, where the Park has been replaced by the Basketball Court, though it is noticeable that the trees were removed.

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, a little closer to the southern part, the Car Park zone was completely displaced by the Tennis Court that

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approximately the same territory as the Car Parking

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, the Cafe and the Reception facilities have been stood unspoilt. One building has been expanded, most obviously the Changing Room, which has almost doubled in size and it was moved to the eastern part.

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, students used the Outdoor Pool during the summer but now it

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reformed into the Indoor one.

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, the Tennis Court was supplanted by the Fitness Center in 1990. Taken as a whole, the university sports park has undergone a number of major alterations since 1990

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the responsibility. What is your opinion?

The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion