The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare how harmful

waste

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disposed

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in three countries namely

Korea

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Sweden

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and the

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. It could be inferred from the charts that underground-filling is the most popular metric for

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dangerous

waste

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Sweden

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and the

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. In

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, a majority of the contamination in

Korea

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is recycled. Looking into more details, landfilled

waste

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makes up 82% of the total

wastes

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waste

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in the

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55% in

Sweden

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, only 22% of the harmful

waste

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Korea

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disposed

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this

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way. Within all three types of disposal metrics in

Korea

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, recycling accounts for the largest share, occupying 69% of all of them.

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applies recycling to 25% of its dangerous

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. The

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does not do recycling at all,

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, 8% of the

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is dealt with chemical treatments, and another 8% of them is dumped into the sea.

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the other two countries do not apply these two metrics, 9% and 20% of the

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Korea

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and

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is burned.

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figure is 2% in the

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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180 words

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many students are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force they to learn foreign languages. Do you extent agree or disagree?

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