9.) Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities around the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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cars have

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for the past thirty years following the

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fast

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people especially in

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urban cities around the world.

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, it’s caused various effects and

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the big problem is the

traffic

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jam.

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one of the most obvious

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of the

car

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traffic

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jam

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which

is

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caused by

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overcar’s

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user

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and

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limitations. The population which move to

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huge city is the one reason for a bad flow in the street, all the employees want to go to work as fast as possible by a personal’s

car

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a recent study from the faculty of

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, at Harvard University, 8 of 10 families have at least 2 cars, 5 of 10 have a

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more than necessary and

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to

growing up

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every

years

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.

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poor public

transportation

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lead

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all of the

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to buy their own vehicles.

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is the

mots

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convenient way to live in

such

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a crowded place. The Global

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of

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Labour Organization

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that the bad infrastructure on

transports worker

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them to buy their own vehicles. To

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transportation

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is the key to

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the

traffic

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jam because the worker will use it to avoid the time

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on the road. It will save the budget and easier to

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during

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rush hour.

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, reducing the

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car’s

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releasing

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by the

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policy is a must because there are many

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necessary

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car

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, the World Health

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announced the recommendations to the

governments

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parties

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the World Motor Summit that developing public transport is the best solution for

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the

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traffic’s

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issue and the

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tax must be implemented significantly.

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might reduce the

car

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buying number

about

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30

percents

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.

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, the growth number of

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private

transportation

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affecting to

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the

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traffic

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. The greatest solution by the international organization is the governments in each state should have the public

transportation

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and

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car’s

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tax policy to lower the buying number of cars.