the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the comparison between Islip town

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centre

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current situation and the future development plans. It appears that there are significant differences and small portions of similarities in either map.

Overall

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, there are major changes seen

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the upper

shops

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area, the different

function

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functions

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of the main

road

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the numbers

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numbers

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number

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of housing and

its

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placement, and the development type of paved

road

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On the other hand

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, the bottom

shops

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are still the same without any changes. Turning to the upper

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shops

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sites, there will be growth and expansion for the bus station, shopping

centre

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, car park, shopping

centre

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, and

the

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apply

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new housing throughout

this

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section.

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, compared to the current maps, the type of

road

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also

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seems to be more complex. It will add a dual carriageway around the city

centre

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and switch the current main

road

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to pedestrian space. The current housing only takes two sites in the south of the map,

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they are creating another two housing spots for future development. Other than that, the school apparently increases in size but the park’s size seems to be reduced. Only the bottom

shops

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that still have the same function and placement left no differences.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, shops, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
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the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some culture children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disavdantages of giving children this message?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some children spend hours every day on their smart phones. Why is this, the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.