The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

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The table gives information about the statical data on temporary employers in four

countries

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between 2003 and 2006,

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insight into trends of labour mobility in

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2006.

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, the increase

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could be seen

all

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in all

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countries

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while

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the

quantity

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number

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of workers in

United

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the United

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kingdom

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was

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doubled in

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period. The table may highlight disparities in the concentration of temporary migrant workers per 1,000

community

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communities

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in 2006, allowing for a

comporative

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comparative

analysis amongst the

countries

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. Discussing the potential consequences of

high

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a high

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or low ratio of

temoirary

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temporary

migrant workers in terms of economic impact, cultural integration, and social services in the host

countries

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

106 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Temporary migrant workers
Labor mobility
Statistical data
Insights
Trends
Socio-economic factors
Economic growth
Demand for labor
Immigration policies
Disparities
Concentration
Comparative analysis
Consequences
Economic impact
Cultural integration
Social services

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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

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