More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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animals

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forced to suffer

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recent times, many species are currently jeopardized and about to completely vanish from the earth. The reasons behind

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issue are extremely

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complicated

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essay analyzes the main of them and provides

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solutions

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Human kind

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has brought tremendously enormous hardships for nature. It was already witnessed, how the dodo bird

dissapeard

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disappeared

completely because of hunting by humans.

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poaching,

deforestation

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and

water

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contamination serve as the hugest reasons for the deaths of

animals

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. Focusing on poaching, it could be mentioned that

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enormous amount of rhinos, elephants and tigers are currently threatened in

a far regions

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of Africa. Poachers

illegaly

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illegally

hunt the

animals

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, kill them in the most inhumane way and

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sell the furs or the skins by smuggling. The

problem

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of non-legal hunting was already handled in many European countries by establishing proper control and patrol

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in the natural

habtitat

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habitat

areas of

animals

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.

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decision is utterly effective in terms of fighting with the poachers

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since it invokes the feeling of

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fear for illegal hunters and makes hunting less attractive in their eyes.

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, the mistreatment of

water

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resources and nature as a whole by humans leads to

extinction

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of many kinds of birds and beasts. Contaminated

water

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threatens the health of beasts and birds,

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, they start to disappear because of

illneses

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illness

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.

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problem

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usually occurs in the areas, where construction or pumping of oil is gaining momentum. In order to solve

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, people who

responsible

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for the work might manage the migration of the

animals

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from one area to another. There are plenty of

services

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that can assist with the acceleration of

animals

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' migration,

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services

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actively

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the movement of

african

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elephants from

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dry regions of central

africa

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where most of the

water

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was contaminated by bacteria to the eastern areas with a better climate and pure

water

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by transporting

animals

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on ships.

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,

deforestation

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is a noticeable issue regarding

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animals

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extinction. Forests serve as a house for

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enormous amount of species. People

that

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destroy

junggles

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jobs

for production or business, force

animals

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to

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direct death

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since they lose their natural habitat. It can be solved by planting more trees by

comapnies

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companies

who use wood in their production or supply chain.

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method is a minimum mean that humanity can offer to nature for establishing

mututal

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mutual

and beneficial relationships, and most

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will work and more kinds of beasts will be preserved and saved. In conclusion, there are 3 main reasons why wild

animals

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are on the verge of

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vanishing:

deforestation

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, poaching and

water

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contamination. The solutions for previously mentioned problems imply human interference and control

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because each of the

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problem

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was created by a human. In terms of

water

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contamination, the migration

managment

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management

of

aninals

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animals

might be introduced. The solution for

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deforestation

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issue is to plant more trees by companies which involve wood in the manufacturing process. The

problem

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of poaching might be solved by incorporating

of

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the

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patrols

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services

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and agencies,

who

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will fight

with

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the poachers.