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The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided chart illustrates the figures of Europe's citizens going to the gym categorized by
ages
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 over the period of 20 years.
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, it is evident to be seen that every age
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 fluctuated in a pattern of similarity throughout the surveyed period. Before the downward point, the adolescent
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 showed a strong growth trend, increasing from just under 5% in 1990 to 30% in 1998, when it surpassed the
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 of 25 to 34 and continued to grow to the culmination of about 50% in 2006.
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, in the following two years, as mentioned above, the percentage rapidly dropped to 40%, slightly higher than 36% of the
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 of 25 to 34 . The statistics for the other groups, the middle-aged
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 (35-44) and the
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 over 45 were steadier. They constantly increased throughout the surveyed period, the middle-aged
group
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 increasing from 6% in 1990 to 40% in 2010, the
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 of over 45 from 4% to over 20%. The former
group
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 evidently had a higher growth rate, allowing it to constantly widen its lead.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Age group (noun): A range of ages categorized together.
  • Gym attendance (noun): The act of visiting or using a gym.
  • Trend (noun): A general direction in which something is developing or changing.
  • Decline (verb/noun): A decrease or loss in quality, quantity, or importance.
  • Fluctuate (verb): To change continually; to move up and down.
  • Peak (noun/verb): Reach the highest point.
  • Demographics (noun): Statistical data relating to the population and particular groups within it.
  • Health awareness (noun): Being conscious or informed about health issues.
  • Fitness culture (noun): A culture that promotes physical exercise and healthy living.
  • Stabilize (verb): To make or become unlikely to change or fluctuate.
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