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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts above illustrate the comparison of three different purposes
on
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 using water in six different countries.
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, most of the countries are using water for
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agricultural
use
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majority
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,
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 as
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South
America
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, Africa,
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Central
Asia
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, and
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South East
Asia
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 Europe and
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North
America
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, most of the water
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in
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 industrial
use
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. To start with,
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Central
Asia
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 held the biggest percentage
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 agricultural
use
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 at 88 per
cent
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 followed by Africa, the South East
Asia
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South
America
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 at 84 per
cent
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, 81 per
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, and 71 per
cent
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. The two lowest in agriculture
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North
America
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 and Europe at 38 and 32 per
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, in Europe and
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North
America
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, industrial
use
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 is dominating at 53 and 48 per
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. The industrial
use
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 usually comes second in place, except in the Central
Asia
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 and Africa. Where domestic
use
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 held the second highest at 7 and 9 per
cent
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, america, asia, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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