The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the internet from 1990 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.rung
the charts give information about the location in which the British logged in to the internet from 1998 to 2004.
overall
, the most popular place in which people Linking Words
gained
access to the internet is Wrong verb form
gain
home
.For the rest, colleges and libraries have almost flat traffic.
in terms of internet access, Home has the most connections, it decreased from about 50% to nearly 45% of users from 1998 to 2000 and gradually increased from about 45% to 56% of people in the next 4 Change preposition
at home
years
. For traffic from the work area, in the two Use synonyms
years
since 1998, it has been flat by about 28% and in the next four Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
then
it has gone down sharply by about 18%.In the College location, it is almost flat at 20% in the 4 Linking Words
years
and went down minimally by 2% in the next 2 Use synonyms
years
.As for the library, in the first 2 Use synonyms
years
, it climbed slightly Use synonyms
of
from 10% to nearly 17% Change preposition
apply
while
in 2002, it declined from about 17% to 14% and balanced in the next 2 Linking Words
years
.Use synonyms
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