The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the internet from 1990 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.rung

The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the internet from 1990 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.rung
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the charts give information about the location in which the British logged in to the internet from 1998 to 2004.
overall
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, the most popular place in which people
gained
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access to the internet is
home
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.For the rest, colleges and libraries have almost flat traffic. in terms of internet access, Home has the most connections, it decreased from about 50% to nearly 45% of users from 1998 to 2000 and gradually increased from about 45% to 56% of people in the next 4
years
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. For traffic from the work area, in the two
years
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since 1998, it has been flat by about 28% and in the next four
years
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it has gone down sharply by about 18%.In the College location, it is almost flat at 20% in the 4
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and went down minimally by 2% in the next 2
years
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.As for the library, in the first 2
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, it climbed slightly
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from 10% to nearly 17%
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in 2002, it declined from about 17% to 14% and balanced in the next 2
years
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