The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the internet from 1990 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
Correct article usage
the location
location
to Fix the agreement mistake
locations
connect
the Verb problem
apply
internet
that British can go to from 1998 to 2004 respectively home, work, college, and library.
Use synonyms
Overall
, home is the most common place where users can access the Linking Words
internet
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
library
only Correct article usage
the library
account
for a very small percentage of the given data.
First of all, home is one of the top choices for using the Change the verb form
accounts
internet
, peaking at approximately 60% in 2004 Use synonyms
although
the data decreased the most over the years but not significantly Linking Words
at the end
of the 20th century with nearly 50%. Linking Words
Next,
in the job, the Linking Words
percent
of British who used Replace the word
percentage
Use synonyms
internet
has Add an article
the internet
downward
trend and the lowest point for Add an article
a downward
this
space was in 2004 when only 10% of people logged on. Linking Words
Similarly
, the university has regressed slightly when accounted for 20% of visitors for 3 years until 2004, it dropped to about 3%. Linking Words
Finally
, the location Linking Words
gets
Correct pronoun usage
that gets
least
attention Change the article
the least
was
the library and the numbers here Wrong verb form
is
is
lower than Change the verb form
are
other
places. The highest was in 2000 when only nearly 20% of people use the Change preposition
in other
internet
.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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