The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of international Change the quantifier
number
applicants
from Use synonyms
China
, Japan, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
USA
and Russia to the universities of one European country between 2004-2008.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, the largest amount of Linking Words
applicants
were from Use synonyms
China
and the Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
least
number were from Japan and Russia. Correct article usage
the least
Additionally
, Linking Words
quantity
of Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
applicants
from the Use synonyms
USA
started to increase over the years, even though Use synonyms
applicants
from Use synonyms
China
decreased.
At the beginning of the period, Use synonyms
China
was in the leadership position, in 2004 the number of Use synonyms
applicants
was over 25000 and after Use synonyms
that
it dramatically dropped to 15000 in 2008. Add a comma
that,
On the other hand
, the quantity of Linking Words
applicants
from the Use synonyms
USA
has almost doubled from Use synonyms
near
15000 in 2004 to over 25000 in 2008.
At the same time, the application number from Russia was approximately the same, under 5000 for all 5 years. Change the word
nearly
Finally
, Linking Words
Japans
applications rose from around 6000 in 2004 and 2005 to 8000-9000 in 2006 and reached a peak of 10000 in 2008.Change noun form
Japan's
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