The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the
amount
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number
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of international
applicants
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from
China
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, Japan,
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USA
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the USA
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and Russia to the universities of one European country between 2004-2008.
Overall
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, the largest amount of
applicants
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were from
China
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and the
USA
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,
while
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least
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the least
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number were from Japan and Russia.
Additionally
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,
quantity
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the quantity
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of
applicants
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from the
USA
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started to increase over the years, even though
applicants
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from
China
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decreased. At the beginning of the period,
China
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was in the leadership position, in 2004 the number of
applicants
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was over 25000 and after
that
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that,
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it dramatically dropped to 15000 in 2008.
On the other hand
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, the quantity of
applicants
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from the
USA
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has almost doubled from
near
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15000 in 2004 to over 25000 in 2008. At the same time, the application number from Russia was approximately the same, under 5000 for all 5 years.
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,
Japans
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Japan's
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applications rose from around 6000 in 2004 and 2005 to 8000-9000 in 2006 and reached a peak of 10000 in 2008.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words applicants, china, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international applicants
  • universities
  • European country
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • growth
  • decline
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • applicants
  • institutions
  • attracting
  • seasonal trends
  • specific years
  • significant changes
  • policy changes
  • global events
  • diversity
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