Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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perspective
perspectives
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people
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structure
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comparison
people
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jealousy
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designs because they have specific Correct your spelling
expensive
design
.
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designs
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in
residence
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of
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people
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travelling
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has become
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different
design
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designs
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people
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people
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in
every thing
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everything
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a specific
structure
.
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structures
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Language
Improve grammatical accuracy by reviewing subject-verb agreement and correct usage of tenses.
Task Achievement
Provide more specific examples or evidence to strengthen your arguments.
Coherence and Cohesion
Elaborate on the points made in each paragraph to enhance their coherence and relevance.
Task Achievement
The essay clearly presents both perspectives on the topic, as well as the writer's opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that encapsulate the main ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
Good use of paragraph structure helps to organize ideas logically.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example