Some people say that as long as professional sportsmen and sportswomen are good players, their behavior on and off the playing field is not important. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
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extremely
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attitude provides positive impacts on their lives and others.
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field
leads them to gain various benefits. Correct article usage
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, they can stay fit and gain good Linking Words
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controlling
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aspect which they should be considered to make better lives and career
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sportwomen
have numerous fans as they can perform well and win some competitions. Correct your spelling
sportswomen
sport women
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and increase the number of people suffering from HIV.
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profesional
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professional
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has
crucial
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impacts
on themselves and others because of their fame. The more bad Fix the agreement mistake
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