The pie charts below show the online shopping slaes for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selectoing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

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, it is clearly seen that Film/Music and Books show an upward trend,

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Travel and Clothes show a downward trend. In detail, the

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of Film/Music accounted for 21% in 2003.It was

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in 2003, and in 2013 Film/Music increased steeply to 33% which was the highest proportion in 2013. In the case of Book occupied

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19% which was the lowest

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in 2003.

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climbed significantly to 22% in 2013. Turning to the

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for Travel accounted

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% in 2003 which was the highest proportion in the period. After that, the

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decreased sharply to 29% in 2013. Regard with Clothes

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occupied 24% in the first year, and the

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dropped dramatically to 16% in the final year, which was the lowest

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in 2013.