The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated graph provides the indicators of world 3329-3663,
energy
origins during 4 Use synonyms
year
period. Correct your spelling
4-year
This
information is measured in Linking Words
watt hours
.
Looking at an Add a hyphen
watt-hours
overall
Linking Words
strukcture
, it is obvious that all of the sources are observed Correct your spelling
structure
and
an increase not a reduction. The amount of wind and solar Correct word choice
as
energy
sources Use synonyms
is
registered a sharp growth, Verb problem
has
while
the Linking Words
quantitiy
of others is observed a moderate and slight increase.
Correct your spelling
quantity
Initially
, we should note that the indicator of wind Linking Words
energy
Use synonyms
source
has risen almost double Fix the agreement mistake
sources
276
-534 from 2009 to 2012. The most striking difference is observed in solar Change preposition
to 276
energy
with 21-104 watt hours.
When it comes to the amount of hydraulic and bio-mass Use synonyms
energy
is Use synonyms
constituted
a moderate increaseVerb problem
apply
Change preposition
of
246
-326, respectively. Correct word choice
and 246
Similarly
, the figure of geothermal Linking Words
energy
Use synonyms
source
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
is accounted
Wrong verb form
accounts
more
or less 3 watt hours (67-70).Change preposition
for more
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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