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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050. (millions) Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050. (millions) Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
dislays
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displays
infrmation
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information
 about
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
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population
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the population
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for
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of
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 Argentina , Indonesia , Italy , and Korea
at
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in
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 the period 2003 to 2050.
overall
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, Indonesia
was
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 a significant increase in
population
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at
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in
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 2003,
then
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 there
was
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a steep rise
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population
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in population
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to continue
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continued
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 in all years
.in
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apply
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the
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apply
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Italy
was decrease
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decreased
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 gradually
in
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from
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 2025 to 2050. In 2003,
The
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indonesia
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Indonesia
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was increase
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was increased
was increasing
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 steeply in
population
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 than all nations ,
whereas
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 in 2025 there was a regular rise popular at 36
then
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 in 2050
popluar
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popular
 was 38 . the least popular was Argentina in 34
at
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 2003 , but in 2025 there was
a
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increace
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increase
popular
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in popularity
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 in 14 . The most popular
population
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 was Argentina 14 in 2050. In detail , The least countries were Italy and Korea ,In 2003 the
ltaly
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Italy
 was third highest in all nations in 54 ,
while
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 there was a steady fall
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percentage
 of
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population
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the population
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at
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from
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 2025 to 2050. The lowest
population
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 was
korea
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Korea
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 in all nations , but there was a regular rise at 4 only in 2025 and continue
at
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apply
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2050 remain popular.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population figures
  • projected figures
  • significant increase
  • significant decrease
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend
  • highlight
  • compare
  • economic development
  • birth rate
  • migration patterns
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