The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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gives information about Correct your spelling
graph
carbon
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dioxide
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emission
per person in four regions between 1967 to 2007.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
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carbon
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the carbon
dioxide
of Use synonyms
Itanly
and Portugal showed Correct your spelling
Italy
significant
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a significant
increased
during the Replace the word
increase
period
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while
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carbon
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dioxide
of Use synonyms
United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
experienced a gradually Use synonyms
declined
trend.
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carbon
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dioxide
of Portugal Use synonyms
were
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tones
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carbon
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emission
in metric and 3 Use synonyms
tones
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emission
in metric respectively in 1967 and 1987. Use synonyms
This
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emission
went up sharply through the Use synonyms
period
, reaching 5.5 Use synonyms
tones
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carbon
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of carbon
emission
in metric Use synonyms
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tones
by the end of the Correct your spelling
tonnes
period
.
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carbon
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emission
of Italy rocketed increased to 1967 in 1977 and Use synonyms
then
remained Linking Words
1977
until 1997. From 1977 to 2007, it Change preposition
from 1977
iis
experienced a gradual increase to more than Verb problem
apply
Sweden
and continued Use synonyms
rise
to 7.5 Fix the infinitive
to rise
tones
in metric.
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Sweden
, Change preposition
to Sweden
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Sweden
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Sweden's
carbon
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emission
was highest among the Use synonyms
carbon
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emission
in 1977. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
Afterwards
it was almost twice reduced in 1987. Add a comma
Afterwards,
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it sharply declined to 11 Correct your spelling
However
tones
in metric by 7 Use synonyms
tones
recording the Use synonyms
highes amout
, compared to the other country. Correct your spelling
highest amount
Then
, there was a decrease of 2 Linking Words
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tones
in 20 Correct your spelling
tonnes
year
, but Change to a plural noun
years
Italy
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Italy's
carbon
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emission
was still higher than Use synonyms
Portugal
by the end of the Change noun form
Portugal's
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, emission, period, sweden, tones with synonyms.
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