The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates information about the amount of
water
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consumption for six regions of the world: North
America
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, South
America
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, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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, the percentage of
water
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for agricultural
use
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in given countries is
a
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peak,
while
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mostly the share of
using
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apply
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water
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is
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declined for domestic
use
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.
Moreover
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, a slightly different pattern can be seen in industrial
use
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.
To begin
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with, there is a similar trend in North
America
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and Europe,
for instance
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using
water
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for agricultural
use
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is
approxiamately
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approximately
a
third,
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moreover
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for industrial
use
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is just around half and for domestic
use
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is a small minority almost a quarter. Meanwhile, the circumstances in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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are distinct. The contribution of
water
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which is used for agricultural
use
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the fewer is Central
Asia
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formed 88%, and others contributed above
four fifths
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.
In addition
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, the lowest way of using
water
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is domestic
use
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is roughly a quarter excluding North
America
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and Europe.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia, use with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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