You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.
• describe what you enjoyed about the course
• say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
• suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear Ali, I hope

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letter finds you in

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of spirits and radiant health and

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hope you are doing well in your life.I am

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who

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completed your cookery course back in June

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2022.I am writing

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letter

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feeback

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feedback

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course

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delivering

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numerous

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learnt from that particular course

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as basic

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me a lot in

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help

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me to cook whatever and whenever

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want in my home,as,

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am living abroad.

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teaching my

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their own meals by their own selves.

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assumed that in

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particular course , a point which is lacking is telling students about

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side effects,as,in

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era,many people are allergic to some kind of

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,we have to replace them.I believe you should

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instruct students

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particular problem. Kind regards, Saqib khan.