The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
The bar chart below shows the percentage of domestic products in 3 different types of countries(Wealthy countries, Globalisers, Non-globalisers) from 1960 to 1990.
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Globalisers and Wealthy land only increased or decreased, non-globalisers changed rapidly between 1960 and 1990. As the chart shows, in 1960, wealthy land
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peak , about 4.7 %, but
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figure gradually declined to 2 % over a 3-decade period.
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was finished at 2% in 1990.
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, the globalisers started at about 1.3%,
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in 1970
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figure rose to 2.9 %. After it had slightly climbed to 3.2% over a 2-decade period, it rapidly rose to 4.9%. It was finished at 4.9% in 1990.
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, non-globalisers began at a low of 2.3 percentage in 1960. Before it was decreased to 0.9 %, it jumped to 3.2 per cent.
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figure rapidly dropped, and it climbed to 1.3 per cent in 1990 .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • affluent nations
  • global business orientation
  • sustained growth
  • investment in technology
  • skilled labor
  • fluctuations
  • global trade
  • vulnerability
  • global market shifts
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • reliance on local markets
  • limited exposure
  • economic downturns
  • implications
  • economic policies
  • strategies
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