The graph shows the transport modes in European city between 1960 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph shows the transport modes in European city between 1960 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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This
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bar chart illustrates the changes in the
transport
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methods in a European city between 1960 and 2000. Four
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modes were recorded in
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graph.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of travellers who used bus, bike, and foot respectively decreased. Among these three
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methods, the
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of visitors using walking decreased to a significant extent, from nearly 35% to roughly 10%.
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, even though the number of people who took the bus had slightly decreased since 1960, from 20% to 15%, the graph presents a moderate increase in
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figure around 1980.
In addition
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, the
percentage
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of travellers who
traveled
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by bike decreased fivefold between 1960 and 2000. The proportion of travellers using cars is the only increasing trend. Specifically, it accounted for only approximately 5% of the
overall
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transport
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mode selection in 1960, which was the lowest
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compared to other modes.
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, after 4 decades, it increased sevenfold, reaching 35% in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, percentage with synonyms.
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