The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

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The graph line displays the changes in three types of crimes in the city of Newport in the period from 2003 until 2012.

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, Burglary crimes show a dramatic decrease over the whole period.

Moreover

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, Car theft and Robbery show a variation in numbers from 2003 until 2012. In 2003, Burglary actions were the highest over time with a number of just under 3500,

then

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, raised to be just over 3500, after that the number started to decrease significantly till 2008. By the end of 2012, it reached its lowest with a number of just under 1500.

On the other hand

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, in 2003, Car theft and Robbery were approximately stable, with numbers of just above 2500 and just above 500 incidents respectively.

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both types show a variation of height and low slightly. In 2012, Robbery was the lowest

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to Car theft with an amount of just under 2500.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

People should plan for their retirement by saving money. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Some people say that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?