The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.

The first graph above illustrates the amount of people using

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in Sydney in the years 1995 to 2004.

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, the second graph presents the percentage of trains running on time.

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, the first graph shows that people in Sydney were most likely to use

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in the year 2001.

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, the highest percentage of trains running on time happened in the years 1999 and 2002.

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with, the trend for

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of

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passengers started low in 1995 at 250

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, it has undergone a massive growth to 300 million passengers in 2001. But next thing you know, in 2002, the

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decreased to 290 million.

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, the trend shows a constant

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from 2002 to 2004. In terms of on-time trains, the

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was fluctuating from the years 1995 to 2003. It started

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92 per

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in 1995,

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it decreased to 86 per

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, before it

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again back to 92 per

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in 1999. But in spite of that, in 2004, the percentage reached its lowest

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at 73 per

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.