The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh
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The pie charts illustrate differences in the figures
of
the types of Change preposition
for
energy
produced in France from 1995 to 2005.
Use synonyms
Overall
, all energies have an upward trend, but only petrol is the opposite. The most Linking Words
energy
produced is coal and other is the least of all.
First of all, coal is the highest choice in Use synonyms
two
charts. In the year of 1995, the percentage of that was about 29,80%. Correct article usage
the two
Although
10 years have passed, the number only increased Linking Words
approximately
1%. That showed coal production was not too dominant. Next type, same with before Change preposition
by approximately
energy
, the data of gas reached 29,63% in 1995 and upturned slightly about 1% after a decade. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, petrol has 29,27% but it dropped significantly about 10% in 2005. Linking Words
Then
, the number of nuclear Linking Words
tend
to grow significantly from 6.40% to 10.10% in 10 years. Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
Finally
, in 1995, other Linking Words
energy
only 4.90% but in 2005 it increased by about 5% and was 9.10% of the Use synonyms
energy
producedUse synonyms
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