The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh
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The pie charts illustrate differences in the figures
of
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the types of
energy
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produced in France from 1995 to 2005.
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, all energies have an upward trend, but only petrol is the opposite. The most
energy
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produced is coal and other is the least of all. First of all, coal is the highest choice in
two
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charts. In the year of 1995, the percentage of that was about 29,80%.
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10 years have passed, the number only increased
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1%. That showed coal production was not too dominant. Next type, same with before
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, the data of gas reached 29,63% in 1995 and upturned slightly about 1% after a decade.
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, petrol has 29,27% but it dropped significantly about 10% in 2005.
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, the number of nuclear
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to grow significantly from 6.40% to 10.10% in 10 years.
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, in 1995, other
energy
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only 4.90% but in 2005 it increased by about 5% and was 9.10% of the
energy
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produced
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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