The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The chart illustrates data about how many participants attended
for
different activities at a special social centre in Melbourne, Australia over a twenty-year period between 2000 and 2020.
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Overall
, among all of the activities, the film club had far more Linking Words
attenders
. Correct your spelling
attendees
Although
the Linking Words
number
of table tennis players increased during the mentioned years, the figure for the amateur dramatics participants fell steeply.
If we look at the details, regarding the film club, the figure was always within Use synonyms
a
range, showing no significant down or upturn. Correct article usage
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However
, it had a slight increase to under 70 by 2020. Seemingly, the martial arts Linking Words
experinced
the same path but with a lower Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
number
of participants which was always Use synonyms
aroud
35.
With respect to the table tennis players, the trend started with a moderate increase to 20 and remained stable till 2010. Correct your spelling
around
Then
, Linking Words
suprisingly
, the Correct your spelling
surprisingly
number
rocketed to approximately 55 by 2020.
Nobody Use synonyms
were
interested in joining the musical performances till 2005. After that, the statistic surged to above 10 by 2010. Change the verb form
was
Following
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this
, the figure continued its upward trend but in a more moderate way. Linking Words
Finally
, it reached 15 Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
With respect to the amateur Linking Words
deramatics
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dramatics
attenders
, the Correct your spelling
attendees
number
was stable Use synonyms
under
30 in the first five years. Change preposition
at under
Subsequently
, it started its huge downturn and plummeted to 5 by 2020Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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