The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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pie chart below, provides

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details about various kinds of energy production in the country of France in

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1995 and 2005 and gives data about the major changes.

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with 1995, it is clearly seen that the most significant products were gas,coal and petrol and they were approximately in the same range with 29%.Following that, other sources and nuclear were below 10% and were less than the other groups. İn 2005, again gas and coal were crucial for that sector and they represented nearly 30% of the pie chart.

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,petrol became 19.55% and was the third most important product in that year.

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,nuclear and other sources covered a bigger area on that pie chart with almost 10%

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both of them.

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,the vital changes that take our attention are, there has been a dramatic decline in the rate of petrol and decreased almost 10%.Unlike that, both the percentage level of other products and nuclear surged up and increased greatly.İn 2005, the products that

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gas and coal and climbed about 1% compared to 1995.