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The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented map represents the
difference
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 condition of
Wellington
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 in three different years from 1780 to 2000. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that
Wellington
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 had experienced deforestation and urbanisation in terms of the improvement in public facilities within 220 years. Looking
to
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 the details, in 1780
Wellington
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 had agricultural space for farming in the middle of the shown picture,
along with
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 a hundred houses in
north
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the north
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 of
wooden
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the wooden
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 area and a river beside the field.
On the other hand
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, 80 years
after
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later
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, a bridge was built to connect
between
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two villages which had 200 houses.
Moreover
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, the number of these houses
were
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doubled to the previous year at 100 in 1780.
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, it is evident that both farming areas and trees decreased significantly. Turning to the change in 2000, Many public
faclilities
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facilities
was
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were
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consructed
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constructed
 in
Wellington
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, including
sport
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the sport
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 arena and educational institutions in the southeast of the city.
In addition
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, resident areas were extended by developing 300 homes for locals.
Moreover
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, there were many
shop
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shops
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 beside the river and two roads in the north and middle of
this
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 town.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wellington with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • surrounded by
  • transformation
  • industrialization
  • modernization
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • transportation infrastructure
  • expansion
  • significant
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • impact
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