The tables below show the results of a survey on people's satisfaction about a local library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below show the results of a survey on people's satisfaction about a local library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the tables provided compares the proportion of satisfaction with a local
library
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among three
age
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groups. In general,
while
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the diversity of books was more pleasing for the
library
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members under the
age
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of 15, users above that
age
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were more grateful for non-printed material. It is interesting to note that the
library
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has provided diverse books which are proper for people under the
age
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of 15 because 55% of respondents at that
age
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rated
this
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very good and 30% were satisfied. Meanwhile, 50% of members above the
age
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of 14, rated it satisfactory. In stark contrast,
however
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, non-printed material suits people above the
age
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of 14. More than 50% of respondents at that
age
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rated it very good and merely 22% of users between the ages of 14 to 39 and 10% of those older than 40 announced their dissatisfaction with non-printed material.
Whereas
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, 50% of
library
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members under the
age
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of 15 accounted for non-printed material as not good and for the other 50% it was either very good or satisfactory.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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