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The maps below shows changes in the city of Nelson in recent times . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where necessary.

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The pictures show the transformations in the City of Nelson from 2000 until these
last
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 years.
Overall
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, there have been a lot of building and road developments in the metropolis between 2000 and now.
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, in recent times the place has become more interesting and has developed into a beautiful capital.
Firstly
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, in the year 2000, the town only had about five properties around the centre,
such
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 as a university in the north, an old market in the southwestern, a train station in the northwestern, and a port in the south.
Secondly
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, there was a large land with a forest next to the university.
Thirdly
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, the metropolis had a simple type of main road and a port near the capital.
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, both of the buildings looked like a minimal facility with limited functionality.
On the other hand
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, there are various constructions that are provided in
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 area, and several of them are new buildings,
such
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 as a new shop, a new train station, a new shopping centre, a residence, a covered market, and a traffic line close to the train station. The classic market before changes to be a new shop. The township
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 has bike rentals for the citizens.
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, the harbour is much different than before because there are restaurants, bars and clubs near the harbour.
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, the road gives access to pedestrians too. Unfortunately, the trees which are located in the Northeastern of the capital centre have been cut completely because of the improvements.

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